“Yes I will”


“Yes I will” was all Maxwell needed to hear. 


Those were the words he urgently needed to hear from his girlfriend’s lips to seal their engagement. 

He had longed for this day, planned his surprise well enough so it wasn’t over the top or “extra” as she would call other engagements they both saw on the internet. He always managed to take out one or two ideas from them. 


For over two weeks he thought, pondered on what could be the perfect surprise for Mabel. What could be simple yet exciting and make her feel exceptionally special all at once. 


Maxwell Oladapo Abbey was certainly not the conventional guy. Mabel’s friends had often called him a husband material sown with a million and one yards. No, he wasn’t perfect. Surely had his bad days but he was an ideal boyfriend. 


Maxwell almost always knew what to say, what to do and even how to go about it. An added advantage was his good looks, an average height, a well paid job; a job well paid to provide for his needs and shower Mabel with gifts. Fair to say he was every girl’s dream man. 


“I wish I was the one dating this your boyfriend...” Tomike said in awe as she kept looking through the gifts Mabel got for Valentine. 

“Babe, you are so lucky. Do you know how difficult it is to find a man in this era that spoils you, takes care of you, kon love you on top!” Isioma added in admiration. 


“I know right, Max is special.” Mabel responded. 


“Special? You call someone who was perfectly and beautifully made just special? Abeg abeg. God finish work for this guy head..” Isioma added. 


They all burst out in laughter. 


Maxwell knew planning an engagement needed him to involve Mabel’s close friends Isi and Tomike. The girls were extremely excited for their friend and had high hopes that “their wonderfully and beautifully moulded man” was on his way. 


Max decided to invite only close friends and family as he thought Mabel wouldn’t want anything more. She often felt it was unnecessary to have a crowd at intimate events.


 “Babe, our wedding is definitely strictly by invitation. Not a multitude that clearly don’t wish us well. If possible, let’s have our wedding outside the country, fairytale ish..” Mabel would say. 


Everything was set from food, venue, decorations and even the engagement ring he ordered from Dubai arrived earlier than expected because of how much pressure he put on the order. 


It was Isioma’s duty to ensure she came to the venue but Mabel was quite adamant about going anywhere after work that particular day.


Isioma only left after Mabel promised to come to the venue after work for their hangout session. She hurriedly went to put finishing touches at the venue as they all awaited her arrival. 


Maxwell was extra anxious and stood like a student awaiting his finals result. He refused to call as it would have given the whole surprise out and decided to wait patiently instead. 





They all attributed the delay to Lagos traffic but deep down Isioma knew something else was wrong; it was more than just a traffic scenario. Mabel wasn’t picking her calls or replying her text messages. 


Maxwell had several thoughts running through his mind. 

“Was she aware of the engagement”

 “Doesn’t she want to marry me”

 “Did I do something wrong” 

“Was she cheating on me”

“Why would she do this to me”


He was utterly confused and even more his guests who seemed tired of waiting for someone who clearly didn’t want to be there. 


After the long wait of over three hours, Maxwell knew something else was up. He suspected Mabel perceived what was about to happen and backed out at the last minute. 


He knew he deserved a response, it was the least Mabel could do considering the years they spent together as a couple. 


At first, he called based on disappointment. He thought of how much effort he put into making sure today was perfect. 

Later on, the started calling based on sheer concern and fear. 


Something was wrong, he knew it, he felt it. 


On the 6th ring, someone picked up. 


It wasn’t Mabel. At first, he thought she might have lost her phone due to the rush but he heard screams, continuous noise..

Something serious had happened and what followed..


“Oga, if you see accident. The person wey get the phone don die oh.. Trailer just jam the car everywhere scatter...


Immediately, he lost his stamina..






“Baby are you okay?” Mabel questioned 


“Baby, Baby!” 


“Max! Maxwell!” Mabel yelled. 


“Yes..” Max replied. 


“You got me scared for a minute there, it’s like you’ve been in a trance all morning.” 


“Would you have pancake and eggs for breakfast?” Mabel asked. 


“Yes, yes I will...”







Comments

  1. This beautiful piece took me on a emotional rollercoaster....I'm glad maxwell woke up from his thoughts... Lol....engagements shouldn't make anyone run bananas.

    Well done Sandra Akaelu.

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  2. You finish work mehn...
    Kudos😉

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